一般来说,我们要追求简练的表达,这就是语言的经济原则,用尽量的少的文字传达更多的信息量,例如:下列各句。
·What I am trying to say is that in my opinion he has not done his work very well and it needs improving. ⒅⒅⒅
·It is difficult to make an estimation of how much money it would cost.
上述两句话虽然显得很长,但是十分罗嗦,词语堆砌。句子越长,读者越难以准确捕捉句子的主要意义。建议改为: