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假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Peter发邮件向你询问你校家校共育活动的开展情况。请回复邮件向他做简要介绍,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动形式(如家长学校、开放周等);
3.你最感兴趣的活动形式及理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【写作思路】 这是一篇提纲类作文。需要写的内容已经列出:(1)家校共育活动的目的;(2)活动的形式;(3)你最感兴趣的活动形式及理由。在写作的时候,注意准确运用时态,上下文连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词或句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。
【范文赏读】
Dear Peter,
I am so glad to hear from you. Now I'm writing to tell you something about the cooperation of home and school in education.
This kind of education aims to improve the understanding of parents in their kids and their kids' study, as well as the ways of teaching. And in the cooperation, parents are invited to classrooms to experience the atmosphere in class, and observe their kids' performances. Besides, we also hold some small group talks or forums for parents to take part in. In fact, I am very fond of this group talks or forums for parents to take part in. In fact, I am very fond of this kind of education, especially the forums, because my parents and I can understand each other more deeply than before.
Hoping this is useful to you and best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【一句多译】
表达方式一: Besides the ways of teaching, this kind of education are intended to improve the understanding of parents in their kids and their kids' study.
表达方式二:This kind of education aims to help parents understand their kids and their kids' study better, as well as the ways of teaching.