Ⅰ.短文改错(10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day during last holiday, together with my friend, Zhou Jie, we travel to Dali by highspeed rail. We arrived at there in the afternoon. Felt excited and satisfied, I stood at Dali's street with my friends, enjoying the last rays of the sun. A few years after, I stood in this same spot for first time with my mother. It was the same beautifully night and the same gentle breeze, and a totally different me. Now, I'm no much a child following my parents, but a young adult who can make decisions by himself.
答案：
One day during last holiday, together with my friend, Zhou Jie, we to Dali by highspeed rail. We arrived there in the afternoon. excited and satisfied, I stood at Dali's street with my ， enjoying the last rays of the sun. A few years ， I stood in this same spot for first time with my mother. It was the same night and the same gentle breeze, a totally different me. Now, I'm no a child following my parents, but a young adult who can make decisions by .
