Test 1
[2019·山东省、湖北省联考]Several days before, we held an activity in the schoolyard to learn and appreciate what the history and art of Peking Opera facial masks. Facial masks dated back to over 1,000 years. Different colors of masks, as well the various facial expressions, represent different characters and personalities of the roles. Prepared PekingOperathemed things, we let Peking Opera fans try them. It took me nearly one and a half hour to finish one piece of face painting. Some fans even put on facial makeup under the help of Miss Mei, a professional teacher, and they certain looked impressive. We all admired them because of the perfect makeup technique. What an meaningful day we had!
答案与解析:
Several days , we held an activity in the schoolyard to learn and appreciate the history and art of Peking Opera facial masks. Facial masks back to over 1,000 years. Different colors of masks, as well the various facial expressions, represent different characters and personalities of the roles. PekingOperathemed things, we let Peking Opera fans try them. It took me nearly one and a half to finish one piece of face painting. Some fans even put on facial makeup the help of Miss Mei, a professional teacher, and they looked impressive. We all admired because of the perfect makeup technique. What meaningful day we had!
①before改为ago 副词错误。ago表示“从事情发生到现在时间过去了多久”,需和过去时连用。before指“从事情发生到过去某个时间是多久”,常和完成时连用。由下文对活动的介绍可知,活动是几天前举办的,故此处用ago。
②删除appreciate后的what 引导词多用。what可引导宾语从句,但此处宾语是名词短语,故what多余。
③dated改为date 动词时态错误。此处date back应用一般现在时表示一种客观情况,且前面主语为复数形式,故用date。
④as well后加as 固定搭配错误。as well as意为“也,除……之外,以及某事物/某人”。
⑤Prepared改为Preparing 非谓语动词错误。此处作状语,且prepare与主语we是逻辑上的主谓关系,故用现在分词形式。
⑥hour改为hours 名词单复数错误。one and a half后跟名词复数。
⑦under改为with 介词错误。with the help of...“在……的帮助下”。
⑧certain改为certainly 词性错误。修饰动词looked应用副词。
⑨them改为her 代词错误。我们都很钦佩她娴熟的化妆技巧。此处指上文中的Miss Mei,故用her。
⑩an改为a 冠词错误。meaningful读音以辅音音素开头,故应用不定冠词a。