Test 1
[2019·成都第二次诊断]Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I am not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me great. “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled me together and kept going. After threehour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.
答案与解析：
Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, turned out to be pretty for the hike. I am not an hiker and those endless steps me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me . “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled together and kept going. After threehour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful on the way, we got to the top finally. our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very inviting.
①that改为which 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处是一个定语从句，先行词是backpacks，应用which引导该非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语。
②heavier改为heavy 考查形容词。分析句子结构可知，此处pretty是副词，相当于very，并没有比较的含义，故用形容词原级即可。故将heavier改为heavy。
③experiencing改为experienced 考查形容词。根据句意可知，此处表示“我不是一个经验丰富的远足者”，应用experienced“经验丰富的，有经验的”，experiencing没有这个意思。
④make改为made 考查动词的时态。与上文中的“Last year”呼应可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
⑤great改为greatly 考查副词。一般用副词修饰动词，在句子中作状语，故用greatly修饰动词“encouraged”。
⑥me改为myself 考查反身代词。与句子的主语I呼应可知，此处应用I的反身代词myself作动词pull的宾语，表示“使自己振作起来”。
⑦After后加a 考查冠词。hike是可数名词，被“threehour exhausting”修饰，表示“一次三个小时的令人筋疲力尽的远足”，且threehour的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a修饰。
⑧sceneries改为scenery 考查名词。scenery是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
⑨For改为To 考查固定搭配。表示“令某人快乐的是”应用to one's pleasure，介词to在此表示“某事发生时某人的反应”。
⑩删除much 考查副词。very是副词，可修饰形容词，在句子中作状语，而much是副词，一般修饰形容词的比较级，此处修饰形容词inviting应用副词very，故删除much。
