写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2019·长春市质量监测]My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she cheered me up when I am down. I remember the day which I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold. I found a little dirty dog by the road trembled under the bush. I stopped to wait for quite a while and there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes, her heart melted. I gentle held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm bathe and fed her some milk and soon she was recovered. Sunny is pleasant surprise for me and my family and I take good care for her every day.
答案与解析:
My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she me up when I am down. I remember the day I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold. I found a little dirty dog by the road under the bush. I stopped to wait for quite a while there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes, heart melted. I held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm and fed her some milk and soon she was recovered. Sunny is pleasant surprise for me and my family and I take good care her every day.
①cheered改为cheers 考查时态。此处叙述作者当前的情况,因此这里谓语动词应该用一般现在时。
②which改为when 考查关系词。分析句子结构可知,此处引导定语从句修饰名词the day并在从句中作时间状语,故应该用when引导该从句。
③trembled改为trembling 考查非谓语动词。句中动词tremble与谓语动词之间没有连词,应用其非谓语动词形式,且该动词与其逻辑主语a little dirty dog为主谓关系,故用其现在分词形式。
④and改为but 考查连词。“我”停下来等了好大一会儿,但是没有她主人的影子。根据句意可知,这里应该用并列连词but表示转折含义。
⑤her改为my 考查代词。根据语境可知,此处表示“我”看到这幕情景时的心情,应该用my而不是her。
⑥gentle改为gently 考查副词。修饰动词应用副词,故用gently。
⑦bathe改为bath 考查名词。根据该句中的“a warm”可知,这里应该用名词bath。
⑧删除was 考查语态。recover表示“痊愈,康复”,是不及物动词,没有被动语态,因此删除was。
⑨pleasant前加a 考查冠词。根据语境可知,pleasant在这里用作可数名词,表示“令某人愉快的事物”,且pleasant的发音以辅音音素开头,故用不定冠词a。
⑩for改为of 考查固定搭配。take care of“照顾”为固定搭配。