写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2019·潍坊高考模拟]I'm delight to welcome you to our Wildlife Club. You'll be surprised that a various of plants and creatures are living here. Here are the most visited tourist sites.
One of the pleasant place is Holland Common. This has been public land for two hundred of years, and that you'll find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common. There's information board about the plants and animals and the Common is accessibly 24 hours a day. Then there is Holl Island which was noted for its great range of trees. It is open only from Friday to Sunday because it's quite small, but if there were people around every day, many of the wildlife would keep away.
Have a good time here!
答案与解析:
I'm to welcome you to our Wildlife Club. You'll be surprised that a of plants and creatures are living here. Here are the most visited tourist sites.
One of the pleasant is Holland Common. This has been public land for two hundred of years, and you'll find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common. There's information board about the plants and animals and the Common is 24 hours a day. Then there is Holl Island which noted for its great range of trees. It is open only from Friday to Sunday because it's quite small, if there were people around every day, of the wildlife would keep away.
Have a good time here!
①delight改为delighted 此处形容主语I的感受,修饰人应该用ed形式的形容词delighted,故将delight改为delighted。
②various改为variety a variety of=various,意为“各种各样的”,修饰名词plants,故将various改为variety。
③place改为places “one of the+可数名词复数”为固定搭配,表示“……之一”,故将place改为places。
④删除of hundred, thousand, million等前有基数词限定时,不用介词of,故删除of。
⑤that改为what 分析句子结构可知,此处引导主语从句,从句中缺少find的宾语,应用what来引导,故将that改为what。
⑥在information前加an board意为“公告板”,为可数名词,此处泛指“一个信息公告板”,应用不定冠词修饰,且information的发音是以元音音素开头,故在information前加an。
⑦accessibly改为accessible 此处作系动词is的表语,表示主语的状态或特征,应用形容词,故将accessibly改为accessible。
⑧was改为is 根据语境和全文时态可知,此处应用一般现在时,故将was改为is。
⑨but改为and 前面提到“因为它很小,所以它只有星期五至星期日开放”,后面提到“如果每天都有人在附近的话,很多野生生物将会离开”。前后都表示限制开放时间的原因,所以两个分句之间应为顺承关系,并非转折关系,故将but改为and。
⑩many改为much wildlife是不可数名词,不能用many修饰,可用much修饰,故将many改为much。