写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2019·深圳市第一次调研]I have a dream to be a doctor. Three years ago, I am badly injured in car accident. The ambulance rushed me to the nearest hospital, that the doctors and nurses did their best to look after myself. Five days late, I was getting better. I watched the doctors to perform their duties tirelessly but offer all their patients the best treatment available. My experience in that hospital great influenced me. Since then, I have made it my life's ambition to fight against diseases and save life. I know my dream will come true if I keep work hard for it.
答案与解析：
I have a dream to be a doctor. Three years ago, I badly injured in car accident. The ambulance rushed me to the nearest hospital, the doctors and nurses did their best to look after . Five days , I was getting better. I watched the doctors to perform their duties tirelessly offer all their patients the best treatment available. My experience in that hospital influenced me. Since then, I have made it my life's ambition to fight against diseases and save . I know my dream will come true if I keep hard for it.
①am改为was 根据本句中的时间状语Three years ago可知，时态应用一般过去时，故将am改为was。
②在car前加a 此处泛指一次车祸，且accident为可数名词，故在car前加a。
③that改为where 分析句子结构可知，本句为非限制性定语从句，先行词为the nearest hospital，表示地点，关系词在从句中作地点状语，应用关系副词where，故将that改为where。
④myself改为me 此处表示医生和护士尽最大努力照顾“我”。此处作look after的宾语，应用宾格，主语和宾语并非同一人，不能用反身代词，故将myself改为me。
⑤late改为later 句意为：五天后，我好多了。late意为“晚(的)；迟(的)”，later意为“随后；之后”。根据句意可知，此处应用later，故将late改为later。
⑥删除to watch sb. do sth.为固定搭配，意为“看某人做某事”。此处指作者在医院时看到医生们不知疲倦地履行他们的职责，故删除to。
⑦but改为and 句意为：我看到医生们不知疲倦地履行他们的职责，并为所有病人提供可行的最佳治疗(方案)。offer all their patients the best treatment available和前面的perform their duties tirelessly是并列关系，而非转折关系，故将but故为and。
⑧great改为greatly 句中的influenced是动词，应用副词来修饰，故此处应用greatly，表示“非常；十分；极大地”，故将great改为greatly。
⑨life改为lives 句意为：从那以后，我把与疾病抗争和拯救生命作为自己的人生理想。此处“拯救生命”并非指一个人的生命，应用复数形式，故将life改为lives。
⑩work改为working keep doing sth.为固定搭配，意为“继续做某事”，故将work改为working。
