写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2019·南昌一模]Nanchang International Marathon has held three times since 2016. I felt luckily enough to be chosen as a minimarathon runner in last November. Lacked special training, I almost wanted to quit an event. On that day, I lined up with other 25, 000 runners, most of who were professional runners. Realizing running was a battle against me, I was ready to finish my first marathon. At mile 1, my leg were still comfortable. By mile 3, I got a pain in my ankle, and I kept going. With the finishing line ahead, I seem to feel faster than before. Actually, I got the same medal as the one the winner had!
答案与解析：
Nanchang International Marathon has held three times since 2016. I felt enough to be chosen as a minimarathon runner in last November. special training, I almost wanted to quit event. On that day, I lined up with other 25, 000 runners, most of were professional runners. Realizing running was a battle against , I was ready to finish my first marathon. At mile 1, my were still comfortable. By mile 3, I got a pain in my ankle, I kept going. With the finishing line ahead, I to feel faster than before. Actually, I got the same medal as the one the winner had!
①has后加been 考查动词的语态。分析句子结构可知，句子的主语Nanchang International Marathon和谓语hold构成被动关系，应用be＋done的形式，且与完成时结构呼应，故在has后加been。
②luckily改为lucky 考查形容词。feel是连系动词，后面跟形容词作表语，故用形容词lucky。
③删除in 考查介词。last November意为“去年11月”，应单独使用，故删除in。
④Lacked改为Lacking 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，句子主语I和lack构成逻辑上的主谓关系，此处应是现在分词短语在句子中作原因状语，故用Lacking。
⑤an改为the 考查冠词。此处的“event”特指上文提到的“Nanchang International Marathon”，故用定冠词the修饰。
⑥who改为whom 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，在从句中作介词of的宾语，修饰先行词“other 25,000 runners”，故用whom来引导该从句。
⑦me改为myself 考查代词。由与句子主语I呼应可知，此处应用反身代词myself作介词against的宾语。
⑧leg改为legs 考查名词的单复数。leg是可数名词，与句子谓语were呼应，故用其复数形式。
⑨and改为but 考查连词。分析句子结构可知，前后句表示逻辑上的转折关系，而非并列或顺承关系，故用连词but。
⑩seem改为seemed 考查动词的时态。根据上文中的“last November”可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
